Reviews For The First Born
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2007 11:50 AM Title: Chapter Twelve: Enter Miranda, Stage Left

All right! Now, Al will have to tell Jenni.

Reviewer: hertinypal Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2007 11:18 AM Title: Chapter Twelve: Enter Miranda, Stage Left

interesting. A new character! ( not a sister but a short girl that jacen teased) Miranda sounds to be a pretty interesti9ng teenaged girl. I cant wait till jenni and miranda find jacen in his new state!

I like the way this come out of the blue. An interesting beginning to the next phase of our story. Poor jac. :)



Author's Response: Miranda has a big part in the second phase of the story.

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