Reviews For The First Born
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2007 11:40 AM Title: Chapter Seven: "We must accept finite disappointment, but never lose infinite hope."
Date: December 04 2007 11:40 AM Title: Chapter Seven: "We must accept finite disappointment, but never lose infinite hope."
This is proceeding pretty good.
Although, I'm confused whether the pet lizard is named "Roscoe" or "Rocco."
Reviewer: billyevil Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2007 11:00 AM Title: Chapter Seven: "We must accept finite disappointment, but never lose infinite hope."
Date: January 08 2007 11:00 AM Title: Chapter Seven: "We must accept finite disappointment, but never lose infinite hope."
The threat of being fed to her lizard was a great idea. Too bad for him that she feinted before she could get him help. Great story. :)
Author's Response: thanks, im glad you are enjoying it. I orginally had a scene planned with him in the cage with hte lizard but i took it and went the direction you see now.