Reviews For The First Born
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Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2006 10:32 AM Title: Chapter Two: A Journey of a thousand miles begins with one step

I really like what you're doing with the story. I hope you continue. Something about the time before being discovered that is the most fun I think.. hope he remains undiscovered for a bit.. Thank you for this! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, he will be undiscoverd for a bit longer. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: Elysianhope Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2006 11:01 PM Title: Chapter Two: A Journey of a thousand miles begins with one step

Love the plot so far, this could be my favorite story I've read so far! Hope you keep it up!

Author's Response: thanks, I am enjoying how this is shaping up so far. I am hoping to have another chapter out before christmas.

Reviewer: Anonymous starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 21 2006 10:16 PM Title: Chapter Two: A Journey of a thousand miles begins with one step

Good start. I am looking frward to what happens next. I wish my wife could get me in that situation, but then she does not like to do anything unusual.

Author's Response: Thanks, this is the first non one shot story i have done in quite awhile. I have another idea for a story, but wanted to do something to get my feet wet before I obligated myself to something bigger.

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