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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2015 12:57 AM Title: His Own Fate

Oops I didn't see that, only read the synopsis. My apologies. Your writing is a bit rusty but this story has potential, hope it turns out great. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yeah, definitely extremely rusty. Hopefully the writing itself will get better as the story progresses.

Reviewer: SheerForce Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2015 12:31 PM Title: His Own Fate

Simply put, good start.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Hopefully it turns out as good as it is in my head.

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