Reviewer: DARK WRITTER Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2015 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like the story, especially since Melody wound up with her devoted Anna and Anna ended up rewared for her devotion with her own little Lisa.  The non-rushed style of your writting and the competitions is also enjoyable to read.  Good work.

If I were to make one change, just leave Tom as Melody's butt-plug rather than only for 7 days.  Though the way you wrote it is much better and adds suspense, as an affectionado of Female Derriere, Tom as Melody's permanent butt-plug just sounds kinkier.  Perversion knows no end {no pun intended}

Keep up the good work!