Date: November 30 2015 5:37 PM Title: Giantess World
(I accidentally hit submit.)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 11:15 AM Title: Giantess World
Those 1 paragraph chapters were super hard to read. I kept on accidentally reading the same line or even skipped a few which made me confused. Take it from me, before I joined here I used to write like that and people said the same thing. Eventually I tried it and I found that it's much easier for me and the readers. Story was good tho! :)
Date: October 15 2015 5:10 PM Title: Giantess World
Damn. Just work on paragraphs and know that seen and saw are not the same. Good job doe
Date: October 14 2015 2:34 PM Title: Giantess World
You really need to work on your paragraphs. I'm sure you have a good story but you haven't displayed it in a manner that's easy for the reader to read. I want to have the luxuary of really digesting the story, so to speak, but I'm unable to. If this formatting issue is the fault of Giantess World then I don't know what to say.