[Report This]Date: November 05 2015 3:42 AM Title: Dr Ex
Please do a sequel to this or hope you will write again. This story was too good to be the last of your work!!
[Report This]Date: October 01 2015 6:56 PM Title: Dr Ex
I still hope youll add a 2nd chapter to this. It's the best story Ive read in a while on here. Hope youll continue writing stories too.
Date: September 12 2015 8:24 AM Title: Dr Ex
I liked it and would like to read the epilogue as well. Keep writing!
[Report This]Date: September 11 2015 7:11 AM Title: Dr Ex
Id love seeing a 2nd chapter, totally loved it. Great plot!!
[Report This]Date: September 10 2015 3:31 PM Title: Dr Ex
Wow love the cruelness
Date: September 09 2015 5:16 PM Title: Dr Ex
Lovely story. I really enjoyed it and would love to see this epilogue you speak of. I love the thought of him becoming just another part of her booty. :D
[Report This]Date: September 09 2015 4:05 AM Title: Dr Ex
I totally would love to see a second chapter to this, you ended the story at the most inresteing part haha :-) Amazing plot. I've missed some good ass insertion stories, they are too rare to find. I would love to see a second chapter seeing the guy literally becoming a shit particle the size of a dust mite, maybe even include some horribile torture for the dust mite guy like releasing a fart, but not just in an ordinary way, maybe even keep the gas bubble in her rectum while she knew he was inserted before and even shrink more and more over time, totally a 2nd shell of his former self, gagging and vomitting with a white face, getting smaller and literally becoming a shit particle, and a little bit later meet his ex next bowl movement, literally ends the plot for him as a flush in her toilet. You totally have great talent in teasing and writing out a thrilling humiliating plot. I hope youll continue to write after this story. Really enjoyed it (so far).
[Report This]Date: September 09 2015 3:47 AM Title: Dr Ex
Best story in a while, thank you for this great start. I was really becoming desperate of all the bad stories in the past few months on here. Finally something promising. Great writing, good grammar, correct tenses, great plot so far. Really entertaining. Im a huge fan of humiliation, smaller shrinking sizes, ass isnertion, vore, ironic and sarcasm writing style. I loves this sentence the most "Do you see what your fate will be yet? You are nothing. You deserve nothing. And I will turn you into nothing. I am going to have you become nothing more than a speck. A forgettable, insignificant little piece of shit." I would really like him shrink even more becoming the size of an ant or smaller, like becoming dust particle, or even better, butt lint, and her making his day a shitty one, literally. I would love in the end some ass insertion, and him literally go through hell. Totally following this. Keep up the great work.
Date: September 08 2015 11:26 PM Title: Dr Ex
Amazing story. Great imagery, strong preference to power, (my favorite part of these stories), I can see a great future for you here. Welcome to the community.
Date: September 08 2015 9:04 PM Title: Dr Ex
Epilogue please <3 This was awesome!
[Report This]Date: September 08 2015 6:43 PM Title: Dr Ex
Definetly interesting, would love to see this epilogue you were thinking of. Wonderful 1st story!
Date: September 08 2015 5:57 PM Title: Dr Ex
I originally wasn't going to read this, but seeing the 5 stars made e think otherwise. I am certianly glad I did read this. Beautiful story.
[Report This]Date: September 08 2015 4:07 PM Title: Dr Ex
Pretty well done, especially given that it's your first story. The release of that epilogue, and more stories in the future, would be greatly appreciated.