Date: April 18 2016 7:36 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
You uploaded the chapter twice, just pointing that out. Now I can see that things are getting complicated but unmasking Persephone is a big deal here. I like the look, it fits her behaviour.
Author's Response:
I have fixed that, along with doing some more proofreading. I spent more time than I should designing characters, and I have renders for all of the main ones. Even the names I spend ages looking for. Chosing names is hard for me. I think what'll do is add the profiles as the characters are introducted, so I'll have profiles at the end of some chapters.
Date: April 18 2016 2:51 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen
Nice render at the end there. I guess Persophone can manipulate Sidney too, it's not a one way street here. I don't see why Sidney is so stubborn either, Persophone is infatuated with him, is gorgoeus, and I don't think she'll backstab him or anything. He does have a girlfriend tho so I guess he's gotta be faithful and all. Anyways great chapter, this is one of my favorites, no doubt, hope for another update soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words. I've already made plans for the next chapter. Hopefully I can introduce a new giantess soon. Sidney is a confusing character I guess? Lots of conflicting thoughts in his head. I'm hoping I can update within the next two weeks and be more disciplined this time.