[Report This]Date: November 13 2015 5:01 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
I read the chapter, Althea is a creepy woman. She's has this childlike innocence to her but that same innocence is what allows her to say and do such brutal things with no empathy or remorse. I suppose being raised by a sociopath like Persophone was another factor. Persophone IS the most well adjusted angel, no doubt but that doesn't mean she isn't a human-eating sociopath with a god-complex...I can certainly see why Althea came out the way she did. And despite it all there IS a nugget of truth to what she's saying, these people DID attack them and probably deserve some consequence. But what she (and Persophone) AREN'T seeing is everyone else near the attackers that are completely innocent in all this!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Sorry I took so long to get back to you. The new Giantess World has left me in shock (I'm considering moving to a different website; I am in negotiations with Giantess Fatale about opening a store there, but am planning to also offer my stories for free there). Hopefully the next chapter will be satisfying, but I'm not sure how many more will be posted to Giantess World.
Date: November 12 2015 7:47 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen
Great to see you back and once again, we end off with an exciting cliffhanger! How will Sidney convince Persephone to spare the outpost? Honestly,we're currently going through a period on the site these past few weeks where the really good authors are not really posting updates or starting new stories.
Author's Response:
I'm inclinded to agree that the standard of liturature has fallen recently, However, what's good and what isn't is enitrely subjective, of course. I'm certain things will pick back up again. I would hope that stories such as this one can inspire as well as entertain.
I've begun the next chapter already and I have several idea to remove the tension. Writing a story is complex, as I'm sure you're aware. But I can't wait to have this story done so I can move on to other things. Obviously, though, I want to make sure valued readers get a decent conclusion.