Reviewer: eve Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2019 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really nice!

giantess moms are perfect

Reviewer: Hongo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2015 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like this story a lot. It's very to the point, and I like how you start it in the middle. There aren't enough mega mother stories! Especially violent ones. Great idea, very sexy.

You also focused on giving the characters some depth and backstory, which makes the action more enjoyable.

I think you could benefit from some editing. When you finish a section, go back over it and fix all the grammatical errors and stuff like that. New paragraph when someone is speaking, that kind of thing. Also, spell checking doesn't hurt. Not sure if English is your first language, but those kinds of things make the story much more readable.

Thanks for sharing with us. Looking forward to more installments!