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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2017 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sharon King, shrinking. Now I feel stupid. Great idea. Points to you.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2017 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 21

You got me. Why is the doctor named Shareen King? Is it after the country singer?
Thanks,
Diesel

Author's Response: "Shrinking!" Get it? ;-D

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 21

Let the shrinking continue. Will we have more of Dr.King handling little people? Will Shawna handle little people?
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response: The answer to both questions is "Yes, most definitely." Why do you think the good doctor is named Shareen King, anyway?

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12 2017 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

Very cool so far.

Author's Response: Thank you, so much. :-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 21

*It was once thought that deep-sea anglerfish were parthenogenic hermaphrodites (aka "futanari fish") because all by-caught specimens were female. But, it was eventually learned that the males of the species bite on to their much-larger mates. Thereby releasing an enzyme that dissolves his mouth and adheres it to her skin! Essentially making him a living (and live-in) sperm bank.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2017 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 21

Is shrinking away to nothing possiable in the universe of this story? Or is the Doctor just telling them the wrost possiable outcome.



Author's Response: More likely the latter.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2017 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 20

Wow! That was quick update. Poor Brad, shrunk to five inches tall. Will Dell get that small?



Author's Response: You'll just have to tune into chapter 21 to find out. ;-D

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2017 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 19

Glad to see this story continued. Poor Dell. He has entered the shrunk club.

Hopefully the wait for the next installment won't be a long one.



Author's Response: As Timescribe might put it: "Ask and thou shalt receive."

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2016 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

Glad to see this story contiuned. Wonder who the nine foot woman is.



Author's Response: Well, if you don't feel like waiting until the next chapter, you could always peruse "Diary Of A Nazi Archeologist." ;-)

Reviewer: Duggernaut Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2016 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting depiction of the food chain. Quirky interlude. Let's see what machinations you've in store. :)



Author's Response: Thanks! It took me all summer to do the background research, so I could keep the zoological terms straight.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2016 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 17

This island is starting to look like a ship graveyard. 



Author's Response: Yeah! Unnerving; ain't it? ;-D

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

Your really on a role here. Like I said before, a really dangerious island. I predict more people will get shrunk before this story is over.



Author's Response: Definitely a safe bet. ;-)

Reviewer: Duggernaut Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2016 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

I must concur with our intrepid hero about the desolation of the friend zone. You have been relegated to girlfriend status. Again maybe it's just me but the unfortunate visual complete with auditory soundtrack is of the fishtank throughout Monty Pythons The Meaning of Life. Probably is me plus I may have been drinking when I read this :P



Author's Response: OOOOOOOOOOOOOkay.

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2016 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 15

Another update already! That was fast.

So Brad is the first to get shrunk. I didn't realize that flying squid also contain shrinking veniom. With multiple animals containg shrinking veniom this makes this island even more dangerious.

PS sorry about my bad spelling



Author's Response: Professor Stewart will compare notes with the good doctor in the next chapter. It'll be quite a surprise where this is going. I promise you!

Reviewer: Duggernaut Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2016 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

You are going all out! Keep it up.



Author's Response: I will do my best. :-)

Reviewer: Duggernaut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2016 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Suddenly I have an image of John Hurt aboard the Nostromo...



Author's Response: Insert sneaky giggling, here. ;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2016 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 14

This is the first time I've heard of a flying squid. Looks like things aren't going to plan.



Author's Response: Like they used to say in vaudeville: "You ain't seen nothin' yet."

Reviewer: Duggernaut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2016 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

All caught up! I still enjoy the voice you've employed to tell this tale and as always your attention to minutiae weaves a compelling and plausible framework to gives this story. All this horsing around...



Author's Response: Thank you. And, nice going with that last-second pun, there. :-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2016 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 13

Just discovered the upadate. (I was away for a few days)

So they see the P. Manticora in action. Expect to see some human shrinking action soon.



Author's Response: A whole lot sooner than chapter 12 was posted. I promise you! ;-)

Reviewer: Mr_G Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2016 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 11

I have a feeling this dream is a preview to what will happen to him in real life.

You're on a role with this story. 



Author's Response: That's the way my creative juices seem to work! Sometimes, there are long dry spells between chapters. Other times; torrential spurts.

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