Date: February 02 2016 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Choices
Are you going to continue writing these? Also if you do are you going to do any F/f I noticed the F/m at the top and was just wondering? Also these are great so far. I gave it an 8 for the rating. ^_^
Date: July 28 2015 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Choices
Well done
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: July 28 2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: Choices
It's great, just keep the vore as a natural habit, not something sadistic necessarily, so it could fit nice
Author's Response: I personally aren't into vore, but I want to try to incorporate it in for the other people in this site.
Date: July 28 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Choices
Great job! Though, I love writing the more sadistic things, I know people have wanted to see a gentler side to this universe. I think this is a good start! You do a great job of maintaining the essence of White Smite while making it gentle.
The only complaint I have would be with the mechanics of the shrinking virus, but that's just being nitpicky.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks! You don't know how much this review from you means to me! I've admired your work for a long time, and it has motivated me a lot!
Date: July 28 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: Choices
I love it. Nothing better then coming home from work to a nice gentle story.
Hope you keep it up man.
Author's Response: :D
Date: July 27 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1: Choices
I like this, delving into the gentler side of the White Smite universe. Would have loved it if you described the giantess in greater detail.
Author's Response: This was more of a test chapter to see if people would be interested in the story. My following chapters should be a bit better.
Date: July 27 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Choices
I love it, please keep writing this one!
Author's Response: Don't worry, I plan to!