Date: January 04 2021 2:58 PM Title: Vengeance
I have just read the whole story and it's getting better and better !!
Will it be possible to have Momo or her friend shrinking even small and see them struggle under either Dayo's or Rika's toenail at speck size ? It will be both great and satisfying given the torment the 2 former gods gave to the micro people.
Thanks to the update anyway !
Author's Response:
Happy you enjoyed the story! That would also be telling. I'll simply say that, at least for Momo, she is in for a bit of a rough time if it continues.
Date: January 03 2021 9:38 PM Title: Vengeance
I'm not gonna mince words here- overall, even unfinished, Adrift is one of my top 10 size stories, easily. Period. The setting and worldbuilding against the beautifully done giga scale, the characters, the variety, just great shit. The only reason I never got around to posting a full review was because I figured a new chapter wasn't going to be posted ever but- whoops shit fuck here comes a new part. I do super hope that hashing out this new chapter has relit your spark for the story as a whole, but even if it doesn't I think this new chapter on its own is a whole lot of fun. The multisize is great but it's also just really nice to see Rika finally finish her arc wayyyy of the deep end, and how that plays with Momo's still general cluelessness to what's going on, and how their interaction takes place ontop of endless devistation is just, *mwah*. Beawtiful.
Author's Response:
Why thank you for the kind words, I am happy to hear it was enjoyed so much! I will say there are a few ideas rattling in my head, but nothing I can say for certain will get written. Still, very happy you enjoyed the new chapter. I was worried that my style would have been too different after all these years. Also yes, being Rika is suffering.
Date: January 03 2021 11:57 AM Title: Vengeance
Yes! You updated it!
Date: January 03 2021 5:51 AM Title: Vengeance
Interesting, we'll get to see how Momo and Isane react to the revelation of all the death and destruction they've caused. Will they feel enough guilt to seek atonement or accept a punishment? If Rika has a moral mental breakdown and won't kill Momo or Isane or betrays Daiyo since Daiyo has been slaughtering the tiny citizens on purpose for awhile now, will another actor, either another god or one of the previous gods/demons, step in to punish all of the indifferent/callous giants? Curious to see if the tiny citizens ultimately get their justice or if it ends with an awkward "we're just going to be leaving now, sorry and bye!" / "the gods are cruel and we are their playthings" ending.
Author's Response:
In the words of a certain anime protagonist, whatever happens happens. That said I certainly trend toward not so happy ends for the smol parties on stories so there is that haha.