I don't care if it's Janine or Sam but someone needs to knock that smirk off Toms face and put the fear of giant women back in him! Insolent pup, lol.

I don't think Lina will be winning any mother of the year awards, lying and deceiving her daughter. Whole family is dysfunctional but at least Janine is my kind of giantess ;)

So his name is Francis. Interesting name. Sounds like a gentlemen. However, most men in your stories are horny brutes so I think we are all going to hate him.

She doesn't know why Francis is coming? Isn't that what you are supposed to ask when you have a phone call? I mean, what did they say during it? Lol.

Yeah, Lina better hide Tom. Tom is that kinda guy that will probably run his mouth at Francis bragging that he can please Lina. Tom wants Francis to be jealous.

I really like the change in Lina and Tom's relationship. The way she is serious and that Tom is still cheerful shows that Lina is going to get upset soon. I like this.

So Tess is the new option to hide Tom? Oh man. That means Sam is going to show up. I thought the mention of Sam was just a way for the readers to imagine a scene with Sam. Instead, you actually are heading in that direction. I did not see this coming.

Haha, Tess might grumble a little. Tess might just hand him Tom to Sam so she doesn't have to carry the burden. Sam, on the other hand will enjoy his company. We learned that at the party, Sam and about every girl fantasized about Tom.

In addition, that scolding will be fun. She probably doesn't even trust Tom anymore. Now what I wonder is, will Tom tell Tess the entire story? Will he tell Tess about Janine and especially Lina? We know Tess will be asking lots of questions.

I like it. Lina getting smart. Like mother, like daughter. We know where Janine's wits came from. Removing Tom from the picture might be the best solution.

When Tom goes back to Tess, and her husband, I'm assuming will eventually leave, will Tom want to go back to Lina? Will he hitch a ride on Tess, sneak into Janine, backpack or something and then sneak back into the house? I can see Tom becoming eager to return again.

Since we also can guess that Sam will get Tom, what kinda girl will she be? Gentle, teasing, controlling, cruel, or a fusion of multiple charactersitics? Do I get a hint? :)

Absconded? Now that's a new word for me. I love writers with good vocabulary. Usually I know most of them. Glad to see an unfamiliar word. "You learn something new everyday".

Tom said tomorrow or Thursday. I guess tomorrow means Wednesday and that means that today must be Tuesday. I asked in my last review about what day it is. Not bad of an answer. I like the puzzle.

Tom asks for the bra? I would never do that! Haha. Seems like this was an opportunity to show who was boss and by Lina declining his option really emphasizes that.

Janine trying to get clues by asking Lina how are things after the phone call. Clever girl.

Wow, those last 3 paragraphs! Now that's what I wanted to see! Too bad it was their "last" night. But still, I'm glad they moved into a Lina controlled relationship where she gets to assert her dominance. Funny part is that Tom is probably licking her anus as well. He probably doesn't care. Haha. Excellent punishment choice. Cruel enough to touch her butthole, but gentle enough to not insert him completely into it. Great mix.

Last paragraph had me drooling. "Pushed him deeper into her panties" "wedging his head" "tight and pinning him in place" "dominance reasserted" "choosing to leave him there for the night". Holy shit! That was freakin sexy!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Figured you might like to see Lina exert her authority, sassy little guy Tom is needs to be reminded just who wear the pants, or panties as it were. 

Damn :( I really hoped Janines plan would work out. Was looking forward to some mean and extended torture and humiliation sessions.

I really hope you're writing something similiar to the Janine Chapters soooon. One of the best sadistic gts scenes out there right now