[Report This]Date: August 01 2015 4:14 PM Title: Mine Eyes Have Seen the Glory
Two words: UH-OH!
Author's Response:
Um yeah this could be a long night.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2015 1:25 PM Title: Mine Eyes Have Seen the Glory
Love the erotic-ness! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Things heat up next chapter. I think creating a little foreplay can help get the story smoldering some. Thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: August 01 2015 11:40 AM Title: Mine Eyes Have Seen the Glory
My heart is pounding as well! Unaware just has this sneaky, sexy and dangerous feeling that makes every move seem like a thrill.
Tom may be clever, but I think his lust for Janine is distracting him from his survival instincts.
Rarely does my heart rate increase while reading a story without sexual content. I have a feeling that that's about to change soon.
I can't for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom glad you're still along for the ride. It's about to get crazy...
Date: August 01 2015 9:10 AM Title: Mine Eyes Have Seen the Glory
And that Tom, is when she finds out a tiny man has been fondling her in her sleep! I would run if I were you.
By the way this: She was lying on her side, back to him, strands of her long unkempt golden hair strewn about the landscape, her weight creating a gravity well in the soft mattress
Gravity well is a very unique way to describe the scene. I like it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I appreciate the comments it helps me develop my writing voice. I thought defining her weight in those terms would convey a sense of size. My thanks for the recognition of it :)