Hi!
First of all, I must say that your stories are fantastics! I am mostly a lurker, because English is not my first language and I find it a little difficult to express myself, but you are so great that I just made an account just to congratulate you.


Another thing is that I think that your stories have become too predictable. I know that you started making the bad girl get eaten to make them different and to stop giantesses get away with eating people, but now they always finish the same. I think that you could get with more variety (I must say that I got quite surprise at the end of The Huntress, I thought that she will end up in a belly at the end). Don't take as a "boo, you are repetitive", but as a "hey, you are great, but more plot twist and bad endings could make this more exciting".
Just my two cents.

Omg!! What a fantastic surprise!! I dont know how to say it, but I think, even this is just a first chapter, it's mostly your best work so far. I think one of the "problems" with your older stories always was that it began really "slow", and even after a few chapters the main plot hadnt done far, which is a problem for a story when it just has a few chapters. But this is a total differen approache. Im so curious already is Simon and Jenny will be digested and book a one way trip through Emmas bowls, with the next step the bathroom, or if something still rescues one of them. Hope to see more Tommy interaction, hopefully he'll stay unaware about what happened. Great start into a new story, loving it already.