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Reviewer: Mechamini Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 10 2015 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: Off we go

Incredible, I am definitely glad I read all four chapters. Well worth the read. On with the review...

The story is not at all generic. It had a very unique setting, involved small female characters and was very thorough in its descriptions. It had a thick plotline and great character development. The vocabulary and grammar were nearly perfect and the story kept me captivated throughout. I also like how the giantess had two sides to her, for gentle and violent interaction. I will definitely be returning for the next chapters. I almost feel bad not giving it a perfect five star rating, but every good story must have its points of criticism.

It was a little lengthy before reaching the depths of the water, aka when the giantess interacts with the characters...lengthy for a giantess story. However, it was well worth the wait. There were not really any points of eroticism in the first four chapters, but it leaves plenty of room for it.

I don't have any suggestions because I am believe it would ruin the creative imagination you have. It's all up to you, carry on!

Author's Response:

Thank you! That means a lot! I was so nervous of how it was coming along because its not a typical giantess story. But I did add a few bits of eroticism to the first couple of chapters. But thank you again, awesome feedback!

Reviewer: Silent-One Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 4: Becoming closer

I'm enjoying it so far.

I await the further adventures of Rylie and Vadana, and perhaps the return of Ava.

Author's Response:

thank you, and yes Ava will come back eventually.

Reviewer: ALIAS PaintBall Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: Off we go

That can't be the end?!?!

Author's Response:

don't worry it's not!

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