Date: July 10 2015 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: Off we go
Incredible, I am definitely glad I read all four chapters. Well worth the read. On with the review...
The story is not at all generic. It had a very unique setting, involved small female characters and was very thorough in its descriptions. It had a thick plotline and great character development. The vocabulary and grammar were nearly perfect and the story kept me captivated throughout. I also like how the giantess had two sides to her, for gentle and violent interaction. I will definitely be returning for the next chapters. I almost feel bad not giving it a perfect five star rating, but every good story must have its points of criticism.
It was a little lengthy before reaching the depths of the water, aka when the giantess interacts with the characters...lengthy for a giantess story. However, it was well worth the wait. There were not really any points of eroticism in the first four chapters, but it leaves plenty of room for it.
I don't have any suggestions because I am believe it would ruin the creative imagination you have. It's all up to you, carry on!
Thank you! That means a lot! I was so nervous of how it was coming along because its not a typical giantess story. But I did add a few bits of eroticism to the first couple of chapters. But thank you again, awesome feedback!