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Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 30 2015 3:28 PM Title: The First Human To Ever Shrink

Very interesting plot so far, please keep it up. Enjoyed reading and very well writing style, also ok length of chapters, could be a bit longer but it's much more then most authors come up with. Great story so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks zol, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

I may want to make some of the upcoming chapters a little longer - I'm not sure yet.

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