Another great chapter. Some sentences are missing the puncuation marks and there are a few spelling mistakes. The first is "Natasha said to me on my mind" we usually say "in" when we talk about telepathy. This should also be change at the end.  Another is "...her feets were becoming more sweaty and smelly.i wasn't going..." Feets are supposed to be feet, there are a couple instances of this, and the I is supposed to be capitalized in English. Also the sentence " atleast smelled better than Rachel's feet" should be "at least she smelled better...". Don't get me wrong I love the story. I just try asnd help people that may miss their errors. I write a lot as well. So mistakes are bound to pop up, especially when writing. As for the story I have to say I love Natasha, especially at the end. She seems to be quite naughty, for lack of a better term. I wonder if the protagonist has realized this is only the beginning and not at all what he wanted. Keep up the great work, cannot wait to see where you take this story. I for one would like to see a toe ring or belly buttong ring or a clit ring in the future. I think he would despise being the toering most of all.