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Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2015 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Trap Finish

Love the story but would love it more if somehow Amy got out of all this. I'm a huge fan of the tables turning. Lol



Author's Response: Don't worry, I plan on a massive twist in a few chapters. Not as much Amy getting out of it, but Amy getting sweet revenge. Thank you so much for your support.

Reviewer: subiectum Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2015 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Trap Finish

Ooooh she's so cruel! I really wonder how small she got!



Author's Response: I know right :P you won't have to wait long. Thanks for your support.

Reviewer: Lgts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Trap Finish

Fantastic story so far



Author's Response: Thank you so so much for your support, more really good stuff soon :)

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Trap Finish

I meant to comment on your last chapter, but I totally forgot. I really enjoyed the previous two chapters, they were great. I am loving how sinister Chloe is being, and the fact that Amy doesn't think she is doing anything on purpose. I can't wait to see how much Amy has shrunk, and what fun Chloe is going to have.

Also,the video you made was amazing. The women looked great, and all the interaction was well done. The final scene of the woman looking out of the mouth at herself in the mirror was done perfectly. That's the first time I've ever seen that done in a video.



Author's Response: Thank you for your support. I really love how Chloe's character is turning out, I feel she's going to be different to the generic woman with a shrunken man/woman in stories on this site. Not that I'm disrespecting them, I love them. But I feel it's time to bring something different to the table. Also thank you for your support on my video, it means a lot. I will definitely make more videos soon. You won't have to wait long for the next chapter, I promise :)

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Trap Finish

Jeez. Chloe certainly didn't waste any time getting started. Amy's going to be walking funny for awhile. I wonder how small she became. Hope we don't have to wait too long to see

Author's Response: Nope Chloe is an eager beaver. And I now have 15 reviews so watch out for the chapter today :P

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