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Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2015 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Goodbyes

A good foot action chapter. I might suggest adding a bit more detail for the next one. This story is still shaping up nicely. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you for another review, it means a lot. And also thank you for your advice, I fully agree with you that it wasn't detailed enough. But right now I'm focusing on speeding things up. Because I've wrote 10,000 words and the main character has only shrunk 6 inches lol. Thank you again :)

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