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Date: March 13 2019 7:55 PM Title: Julie Juice

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Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2017 7:39 AM Title: Julie Juice

why did you comment on everyone but me? really rude

Author's Response:

Assuming I have time to comment on something when I don't have anything to say about it also really rude. I don't hate you, I wasn't slighing you, I just didn't have anything to say about your comment.

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2017 7:45 PM Title: A Blossoming Bitch

Nice chapter! Glad you kind of went with my idea! Is this chapter finished though? It seems like it ends abruptly, without Bianca eating the other tinies and no one ever wearing the thong the customer is shrunken in.

Author's Response:



A lot of the time, I prefer implying certain endings and tiny-happenings than I do writing them. There are a fewplaces in the previous chapters where tiny's are hinted at being tucked in certain places; Erica from the horse chapter, I believe I wrote some hints there about her having tinies in her boots, for instance, and I recall the witch from the beach chapter having a towel that tried crawling away while she went out into the ocean. 

I like writing my hints in there, and I feel like it's clear enough that the tinies from the end where the chips on her sandwich that I'm glad enough to write the tease but not the scene.

I hope that makes some sense. As far as the customer in the thong, I personally feel that having every little thing pan out for my characters leaves the chapters feeling kind of boring. I'm sure Bianca hoped (in that weird way authors sometimes do where they talk about characters they wrote having their own consciousness) that someone would fuck that days up, but that might have happened tomorrow. At the same time, I like for most things to pan out for them; Kinda pointless to write an asshole character who murders people constantly and have them fail all the time. I'm going for serial killers here, basically, not wiley coyote. 

I hope that all made sense! It's been a long day, and I've been busy writing the opening chapters of a completely new story that should be appearing on here within the next day or two!

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2017 11:25 AM Title: Julie Juice

What do the letters mean next to the various titles?

Anyway, more ideas:

For that currently unknown number 11, maybe do a gym? You said you want feet related content, you could imagine a girl shrinking down a pair from her local gym and making a pair of insoles to get her through a workout on the treadmill. Putting another shrunken person in the back of her shorts for some squats or stationary bike would also be fun. Crushed under boobs for push-ups?

Less ideas for toy store, other than it would be fun to have someone package up a co-worker they don't like and sell them as a doll or something. Turning some rude children into toys might be fun as well.

Hapless Halloween: I think a natural thing to do here is to follow a young woman at home being visited by trick or treaters. She could get a particularly rude batch and shrink them or transform them into candy. Maybe she could start by dropping a few of the trick or treaters into the costumes of her younger siblings before they go out trick or treating, leaving them to be stomped under foot as they run around looking for candy. It'd also be cool then to see the remaining trick or treaters being devoured by nicer trick or treaters from their perspectives. Like, someone buried in a Reese's cup getting eaten, or someone who has been turned into a lollipop dissolving in someone's mouth. Better yet if maybe an older girl who is supervising her trick or treating siblings eats some of the tinies after borrowing candy from their baskets.

Author's Response:

The letters next to the various titles are to remind me that I already have the main character's names picked out for each chapter.

I like the gym suggestion!

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2017 6:05 AM Title: Julie Juice

Nice job on the horse riding chapter. Thanks for that.

Idea for the shopping mall:

Retail service worker hates putting up with rude customers, deals with this by shrinking them and adding them to the products she is selling. Like, she shrinks someone and drops them into a pair of sneakers or cleats someone wants to try on, or sews them into a pair of underwear hanging on a rack, etc. Maybe her last customer of the day she could shrink and bring with her to the food court and add him to a snack.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2017 5:12 AM Title: Equestrian Erica

interesting story. would have been awesome if it was a transformation story, and one guy turned into a apple and fed to a horse, digested adnd ending as horse apples, that would have been hilarious.

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2017 4:54 AM Title: Julie Juice

Thanks for putting the list back up. The next chapter, "The Horse Ride", sounds like a lot of fun. I'd love to see someone stapled to a horse's saddle and forced to be the cushion for a beautiful equestrian.

Author's Response:

I put it back up specifically because of your review, because it was a good idea to have that up. There are some chapters that will get away from me (for instance, Sally Rose Pt 2 was originally going to have something to do with a shoe shop, but her first chapter got waaaaaay too long for my tastes, and it became two), and get written differently than I intended them to be when I picked them out two+ years ago.

Sounds super do-able! Unless you ask me not to, I do intend to credit you for the idea when the chapter goes up. By the time you read this, it might already be up, but I'm not all that sure when I will finish writing it.

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2017 5:28 AM Title: Alex's Games

So glad to see another chapter in this story after such a long time from the first one. Chapter 3 is definitely my favorite so far, looking forward to more. I did like when you had the list in the story description of the 25 or so planned chapters you had.

Author's Response:

The list is back up in the first chapter, and I'm taking requests for use in future chapters!

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2015 11:11 PM Title: McKendra

Where are the 24 other chapters?

Author's Response:

Finally going up, part by part!

Reviewer: The Lurkmeister Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 11:39 AM Title: McKendra

Is this... part one of a twenty five part series? If so, I'm very excited. And even if you never get around to the other stories this one was pretty good. :-) I really enjoyed Kendra's attitude, which I think any of us who's ever worked retail or in fast food can identify with. The little peek into the backstory at the end was also great, even if the rest felt a little rushed. Thanks so much for sharing, can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Author's Response:

I appreciate your thoughts! I might re-write McKendra a little bit, I'm not entirely satisfied with it, but I think I'll finish the rest of the series before I get to that part.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2015 8:07 PM Title: McKendra

Good start, seemed he got kind of screwed though.

Author's Response:


Sucks to be him, but he won't be the only one getting an unfair shake, here!

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2015 3:54 PM Title: McKendra

What a fantastic 1st chapter. I love food vore and especially cruel revenge scenerio. Very creative and cant wait to see more

Author's Response:

Feel free to request something if you have anything specific in mind! You can find upcoming chapters in the first chapter.

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