[Report This]Date: June 11 2015 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow Megan is an awesome character in a true cruel and sinister way. This story is moving very quickly while still doing a good job developing characters. I love the quoutes that you insert in Italics as well. Lends a certian weight to the story. Hope to see more soon!
Author's Response:
Glad to see you enjoy reading Megan as much as I enjoy writing her, combine. I expect the third chapter will be here sooner than the last. I'm eager to introduce readers to the rest of Megan's "friends."
Date: June 11 2015 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wait, I'm confused? Megan was Loyce or are they separate people? I reread the whole thing and am confused.
Author's Response:
No, no, they're totally different people. Loyce got exsanguinated during Tracy's prison incident; Megan had a different prison incident around the same time (due to a variant of that strange gas, as described in the Giantess Club comic "Above the Law"), got subdued and seemingly fixed, and had another worse growth spurt that annihilated (what I decided would be) San Diego. Tracy recognized the pictures of Megan because, as mentioned at the end of Chapter 1, she was all over the news for a long time, being the giant woman who tore a chunk out of the West Coast.
I'll be honest, I'm not sure where confusion might arise.
Date: April 22 2015 2:46 PM Title: Prologue
I maybe should've reviewed this earlier, because i'm really digging the story so far.
Author's Response:
Hey, man, better late than never! The next chapter should be going up within the next couple of days (maybe tonight if I get my ass in gear), and things will be ramping up.
Date: March 12 2015 7:32 AM Title: Prologue
This is good, two chapters in and I am hooked. Alison and Tracy got something beyond the relationship the latter thinks, since Tracy is possibly connected to Megan's disappearance.
You combine smut and story very well, can't wait to see more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Nostory, that means a lot. I'd hoped that posting my stuff here as well as on GTS City would bring some more fruitful feedback. As for Tracy being connected to Megan's disappearance... they are connected, but maybe not in the way you're thinking. It will make more sense by the time I've finished chapter 2.