Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2015 12:06 AM Title: The Program

Im giving it 10/10 because I loved it, it had intense length, the plot was awesome, and I enjoyed it. It's funny because it had pissed me off in the past so many times on here, shitty stories always get 5/5 stars even if it's just a 100 word chapter and nothing even happened in it. I had my own theories on this and I think the rating system should be removed from this site, actually the whole site is really bad programmed, mail/message system isnt working, favorites arent working, search is very primitive, no real multi-tag system, and so on. But I also think that your stories are just too good actually. Most people on here are looking for short fast primitive sex action scenes and arent realyl interested in epic plots. It's like cheep fast-food for the mass. And those always get 5 stars easily. So please dont worry about it, and try to see it from this point of view. Your stories are on a much much higher level than 99% of the stories on here, and that's a good thing. Dont give up, and see it positive from this side! I know it sucks to get few reviews or bad ones, and you dont deserve it. I am sure though there are a lot of people eyoing your work. I definitly do, and always will. I was a little bit sad that there was no Tommy action in the last chapter, still it was awesome. And I also hope a little bit that you maybe will include some male vore in one of your future stories, by Tommy or Simon. I loved the ironic parts in the chapter so much, especially this one:“I’m guessing you don’t need dinner!” he joked.“Yeah,” she said, a hand on her tummy. She let out another light burp. Simon laughed. She did too.“You okay?” he asked.“Yeah, something I ate was giving me indigestion, but my belly must’ve taken care of that because now all the ache feels like it’s because my stomach walls are stretched out so far. Just meaning I ate too much and that’ll go away in a few hours,” she said, almost laughing.Simon scratched his head. He was pretty sure he knew what had given her that indigestion…

Keep up the fantastic work, youre an amazng author.

Author's Response:

Thanks zol, you've been a reviewer since the early days of the voreverse and for that I am very grateful. Thanks for the 5-stars and I'll try to keep up the irony for future instalments!