Date: June 21 2015 4:17 AM Title: Meatball Subs and Tummy Rubs
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Date: March 24 2015 5:04 PM Title: Meatball Subs and Tummy Rubs
Reviews like the one from julieshrink is the reason actually why I hate this site. Why? Because I imagine 99% of the readers on here having an IQ not higher than a slice of bread. And that's also why you not getting that much reviews, or that fast of reviews like others stories. Because your work is "on a too high level" for the average reader on this site. But anyway... I really liked the last chapter, not quite as much as the first two, but still 4.5 stars worth :] Really clever plot, loved the boner part with Tommy, and also of course the great cliffhanger ending, how the "real plot" kicks into action, and I guess readers like julieshrink will get some easier and faster satisfaction. Please dont hear for those nonense "reviews". You did an amazing job for builing up the plot.
Date: March 23 2015 6:46 PM Title: Meatball Subs and Tummy Rubs
Very good.
Show more digestion.
less writing, more to the point.
Date: March 22 2015 12:55 AM Title: Meatball Subs and Tummy Rubs
Seeing the small number of reviews on this story, I just had to drop by for a little encouragement :)
So just keep up the good work. I like the way you write and this story is well on the way to become your best one as of now.