[Report This]Date: March 20 2015 12:47 PM Title: Road Trip
Sorry for the late review! I didnt feel that well past the last days, but I didnt want you to think I wouldnt be interested or anything!! I loved the 2nd chapter and I found it as good as the first so I will definitly give 10 star :-') Because I think it's the best work of yours so far when it comes to writing style and plot structure. I love the whole thing because it's really clever and thought through so far. And for this chapter I loved the middle part so much with the eating and belch contest, especially between Tommy and Simon :)
Author's Response:
Thanks and also thanks for the 5-star rating! Between my studies, my job, and my gf ;) I haven't had much time to write so the thrid chapter will either be out later today or possibly even tomorrow :( But there's going to be some vore scenes in this next chapter so Im sure itll all be good in the end!
[Report This]Date: March 16 2015 12:19 PM Title: Road Trip
And for the 2nd chapter too :-) The burping eating junk food part was my favorite, especially how the boys joined in and they had all a good laugh. Very good plot so far, looking forward a lot for whats coming!!
Author's Response:
Glad you are liking it!!! I will be sure to have another chapter up on Saturday! :)
[Report This]Date: March 14 2015 1:24 PM Title: Road Trip
Very Good...
Author's Response:
Thanks! and thanks for the 5 star rating too! I really appreciate it