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Reviewer: HuzToru Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Studying with Tara

I really such a world existed. I would be living in heaven everyday till the day I would die. *sighs* I wonder what happens next for the group of chracters in the story.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Studying with Tara

The darker side of this universe is coming out, women's groups who want to assume control of the world, put women in charge and reverse gender roles. I am disturbed but not really surprised though that women want to assume control now that they have a physical advantage. 

 Tara is right, he needs to talk it out with Elise and get her to see that side of him, that she is suffocating him. I don't know how far she would go to keep him but it might  go bad if Alex tried to break up with her. She is so controlling she might kidnap him , I can see it. 

Lines like " My thoughts returned to The Matriarchy briefly.  Though some of what they were doing was lauded as positive change for women, I had heard of horror stories too.  It seemed that some of what occurred with males at their settlements was not strictly voluntary.  Slaves, abused day in and day to satisfy the unending sexual requirements of the society’s titular members.  I shuddered.  That would never happen to Alex.  I would not allow it.  " suggest she is actually doing what she sought to avoid. 

 

Great chapter though!

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