[Report This]Date: February 24 2024 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Mom
Continue please, I want to see Alex's Mom become so huge and sexy, giant and growing moms make hot scenes!
Date: June 04 2015 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Mom
The chapter was nice, but your beginning comment was glorious. At first I was quickly horrified she'd make you stop, but now it's just a little funny how cliche it sounds.
[Report This]Date: June 04 2015 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Mom
You sound like a lucky man to have married a wonderfull woman and have her discover your fetish later and embrace it. I love how you've described the characters so far in this story. Intrigued how you plan to introduce conflict later on since you've engaged your main characters in a relationship so early.
Author's Response:
I couldn't agree more. I hate to say it, but I think this has taken our relationship to a new level of depth. Been married for 10 years and we're still exploring each other's passions. It doesn't hurt that she's really into it.
I have conflict planned, yes. I don't believe in the forced drama for the sake of drama. It's just too easy and I feel it's true to life that young people in lust or love would get together instead of sitting on their hands. Hopefully their experiences will cement their relationship, not spoil it.
Date: June 03 2015 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Mom
Beautiful stuff and with good plot development AND world building with the character's constantly updating on us how the world is affecting them!
Author's Response:
Nostory, thanks so much for faithfully responding. I'm sure you understand better than most that the its the feedback that makes the difference betweeen writing your own story in a .doc file never to see the light of day and a story that lives and breathes.
I bow before a master. Reading more of your material and providing feedback is high on my list of priorities. If I had time recently to read as well as write, I would have done it already. Regardless, I am grateful for your words.