[Report This]Date: February 12 2023 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Great, I like the Mom growth, I hope she grows even bigger and hotter!
Date: January 16 2017 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Ah crap, Alex got really beaten up. I do hope he is reunited with Elise. Glad to see you back!
Author's Response:
Thanks, it's good to be back.
[Report This]Date: January 15 2017 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Yes! So wool to see this back! I worry for our hero, and while I don't need to know details, I must know if there is hope of his rescue!
Author's Response:
Thanks Newb! It means a lot to have your readership and comments.
I definitely have a happy ending planned. Count on it!
Date: January 15 2017 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
I haven't read your update yet, but I just want to say, that on every story I've ever reviewed, most of them have stopped writing after I review them, and I always felt like that curse would never be broken.
Author's Response:
Sorry Cloud! I do feel like a dirt bag when I let people down that actually enjoy my work. I'm really sorry it worked out that way in the past, bit I can assure you I've already started to write the next chapter, and have outlines for the remaining 6-7 chapters until the conclusion. After so many let downs, I probably shouldn't *promise* that I'll finish it this "go around", but that is my goal, for certain.
I have ideas for another story is really like to get to, but I don't want to start a new story until I finish my previous work.
Thanks so much for reading, and sending word. It really makes it all worthwhile. :-)
Date: May 26 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Alex is settling into his new role, that isn't a good thing but it does keep the drama going. I just hope he doesn't get lost in it.
Date: May 19 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
I love your worldbuilding. A dating site who protect men original idea.
Author's Response: I appreciate the feedback. I like thinking about the implications of a society with people like that. Just hope the story doesn't get too mired in them.
[Report This]Date: May 18 2016 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Great to see this story get updated once more!!
Can't wait to see what Elise does!!
Author's Response: Thanks for posting!
Date: May 06 2016 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Good to see her side of the story, how she misses him. I half expect her to start hunting for the people who took him and then having to resist the brainwashing of the Matriarchy.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm having a bit of fun with her at the moment.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2016 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Wow! Didn't see that coming at all! It sheds a whole new light on the new dynamic between men and women in this world!
Well played, good sir. Well played.
Author's Response: Haha, you're giving me more credit than I deserve, but thanks!
[Report This]Date: April 30 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Wow, love this chapter! I'm definitely a breast fan. Are we going to see more of Annette?
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Unfortunately, I don't have any more sequences with Annette planned for the story at present, but I really liked writing her character, so who knows... Maybe I could slip her in somewhere down the line, or possibly in some kind of spinoff later on.
[Report This]Date: April 29 2016 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Great story!!
Please continue your great work!
Any possibility the virus affects mental capabilities of both infected men and women to make them different than the uninfected but compatible with each other.
Since the infected women's brains are four times larger they might be different
Author's Response: Interesting take! I hadnt thought about that, but I suppose it's one way to look at it. I tried to frame it out a bit in some of the earlier chapters by giving theories, but I don't think I ever said for certain how it all works. That was sort of by design, to allow for some reader interpretation. Not sure if I pulled that off well enough.
I'm definitely trying for a very fine line between the virus just periodically driving women to act differently and full out personality alteration. It's a tough thing to do.
Thanks for your feedback! I've got lots more story planned and I'm going to do my best to keep new chapters coming every few-several days.
Date: April 27 2016 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Piggybacking off of Nostory, will that Paradise be with Elise or the matriarchy?
This is going places! :)
Author's Response:
Ahh, I see the way you're interpreting it. No, it was never my intention to have Alex switch allegiances to the matriarchy. Doctrinally and dogmatically, they are too narrow minded. I would hope that Alex would learn a bit about himself and the world after spending time among them.
My point with some of the discovery of CH 20 is to show that the individuals that comprise the group can actually be quite decent. It was also partially to assuage possible reader concerns that the story was taking some significant turns toward an all out torture/bondage theme - which I can see backfired somewhat :p
[Report This]Date: April 24 2016 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Glad to see your update!! I wonder what these education camps are all about?
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, I can't promise that I'll get into them in depth. I've got a lot of ground to cover to get to the end that I have envisioned, and I'm really trying to narrow my focus to progress the plot a bit now that I have established the setting and characters (in large part). I think that's one of the writing weaknesses I'm trying to work on the most - thinking of some other interesting tidbit that fits within the world I've created and chasing it down a proverbial rabbit hole. But I'm rambling...
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: April 24 2016 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
It is so awesome to see this story return! Your writing is impeccable! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thank you! The story has some pretty big curveballs coming in the immediate future. Hope you'll enjoy it.
Date: October 14 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Alex is in trouble, hope Elise is nearby or he can run fast because the sexual harrassment is ramping up!
Date: October 09 2015 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Seems the role reversal continues as more and more women take over the roles of menx men being forced into more domestic roles.
Date: October 05 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Definitely, there's been plenty of updates all across the site!
Author's Response:
I want to, but this site is completely borked. Other than selecting specific authors or stories there's not a great way to pick what you want to read ATM unless its in the most recent stuff.
I really just despise the site layout. If I had a wish list of things I would do to this site to fix it, it would look something like:
1. Fix tags to actually work for searches (this is critical)
2. Have "Most Recent" stories be filterable AT LEAST by major categories (growth/shrink, etc). This is a big one for me since 80-90% of the stories don't interest me (anything shrink, generally). No offense intended to authors of that work. It's great work, no doubt, but it's just not my bag.
3. Make it easier to give authors feedback. Allow anonymous or guest feedback. It's no secret - authors like feedback. Obviously we're not doing all the work for a few words from someone we'll never meet, but it's nice to know people give a crap about the work you're doing and are reading it. Needing to sign in and post feedback from an account is going to eliminate a good amount of your feedback right off the bat, especially when you're dealing with fetish writing that people probably don't want to register to review anyway.
4. Improve feedback correspondence in general. It's completely stupid that each review can't be more than a single response, and that any additional back-and-forth needs to come via additional reviews. Dumb.
That's just to start with, but it would really improve the experience, IMO. I'll get off my soapbox now :p
Date: October 05 2015 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Wow, that was naughty but overall it was very enjoyable watching the three of them get up to no good!
Date: October 04 2015 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Loved the new update and after so long too!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I've got some reading to catch up on here on the sight too!
Date: June 27 2015 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Sexy time coming!