[Report This]Date: March 17 2015 6:40 PM Title: Date 3 - Fresh Air from 50 feet
Probably the best chapter so far! Really enjoyed this one!
As for the brob male thing other readers have mentioned, I totally understand why you'd want to leave them out of the story, however, I thibk it'd make for a great story to have a regular sized guy go after a brob girl who's got some brob guys chasing her as well.
I'd recommend reading the story "It's Friendship" by Kosmita of you're looking for ideas (a little bit less of a plot & a bit darker than these stories, but there's a couple great scenes that show how giant males can be used very effectively).
Date: March 16 2015 1:48 PM Title: Date 3 - Fresh Air from 50 feet
This part was a very sweet part to read its good to read that not all giantess are strong i think that she was a bit sickly was a nice touch and the way it was written made her very cute.
About the next part after this i read and i found it ok but one thing that always comes to my mind when i see stories like this where we see people of different sizes in the world you would think there would be just as huge males around that are the birth farthers to these girls, i meen they all can't be small to these m class girls.
Other than that i been liking the stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, angeloflife! :) About Brobby males, they're definitely around, but I won't focus too much on them. I'll explain more in another chapter :)
Date: March 15 2015 7:48 AM Title: Date 3 - Fresh Air from 50 feet
Elena is pretty amazing and for a moment I thought you would kill her off because well..she had a breathing problem and nearly died trying to find our hero.
Was really touched when his parent's offered to pay for Elena's medication, a gesture I totally did not expect. I expected the Brobs to be richer than Lilli's because they simply needed more money to get by.
As for my own, I'll just say that the story I started here isn't done yet, we've still got some way to go before it ends. Just not any time soon, I need to clear Downtrodden, BFG: Dance and The Escape first. Downtrodden is a little tricky, I've had to do some rewrites recently.
Author's Response:
Hey Nostory! Thanks again for your story :) I actually think Lillians would be way richer than Brobs because for the same amount it takes to feed a Brob, you could probably feed many more Lillians. Short of extortion and pillaging, an honest Brob would need a lot of capital just to stay with Lillians, so most just choose to stay in similarly sized communities. Everything's the same for everyone that way :)
Take your time with your own story! We've all got our own series' to worry about, and I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants to see more of your work :> Speaking of rewrites, I read through The Magister Gigantique, and I definitely need to rewrite some things... ._. Whrn I've the time, I guess, I'm super busy atm because I'm close to the end of my semester >.<
Thanks again, and I'll see you in the next chapter soon too, I hope! :)