[Report This]Date: March 28 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 12- A Restless Night's Sleep
Yep, he should have stayed with Kiana. That way he can at least enjoy being stuck there.
Zack should just give up trying to restore himself and just try to take advantage of this new situation.
I really like how Kiana keeps mistaking Zack for other things. What if Zack dresses up as a doll to blend in, but Kiana just sees a sex doll. Now that would be fun to see.
For now, we got to wait to see what happens to Zack next. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I have to say that Kiana is definitely my favorite girl out of the three. She's especially fun to write chapters about! As for your idea, that's a really good suggestion. I'll have to keep that in mind...
[Report This]Date: March 28 2016 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 12- A Restless Night's Sleep
I love the parts when he is flattened and gets sticked to their bodies like a tattoo. My favourite scenes with any doubt. Very good chapter! Also, I think it's amazing that you can write a whole chapter per day. And not a small one but a big one. Congratulations for that too!