Reviews For Jingle Bellies
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Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 08 2014 3:05 AM Title: Hormonal Teenage Sleigh Ride

Uhm wow, this is going so great already. Really loving this story so far and it seems to get awesome really soon. The pool idea was nice, really liked the sex part, hope there will be more. Hope for another update really fast to see how it continues.



Author's Response:

More sex in the next chapter. theres only 3more chapters, so everything will move quickly from now on

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2014 5:41 PM Title: Hormonal Teenage Sleigh Ride

Ahhh! Fantastic story development <3 Brilliant idea with the water pool, so Tommys inear would be destroyed and he had no chance in hearing his shrunken friends calling for help. Also I had a idea which would be awesome: Now Tommys clothes totally wet what if Cat would offe him totally "ouf of friendlyness" dry clothes from her brother same age as Tommy. But she prepared them a little bit before, by glueing Bobby with some spit in the inside underpants directly in the middle which would get stuck where the buttcrack was. Tommy would confused of where the friendlyness came from accept it with an "uhm thanks" lifting an eyebrow and slip into the to his though thankfull dry clothers. Bobby would though have some horrible journey of his life getting inside Tommys butt crack because of the underpants being a little bit too small and giving him a wedgie, also during making out again with his new gf, they would get make that wedgie. Totally soaked in horrible swet and smell Bobby would fight for his life not getting inserted. After some relaxing time Tommy would need to use the bathroom to take a shit, which would be the end of Bobby in a horrible way. And what if Cat glued Francine on the inside front part of the pants, leading to her ending on Tommys cook which would be rammed inside Tommys gfs ass, or her giving him a blowjob. I really loved that chaper, especialy that gang around Mark was a great idea. What if Mark also gets shrunk and ends in a glass of punch being swallowed by Tommy later, so Tommy gets the "revenge" on Mark, without even knowing he gets a one way trip through his digesteive system. Loved the sex part between Bobby and Francine too. Really great chapter and looking forward for the next :)



Author's Response:

Glad you always have such an enthusiastic response and lots of ideas. Sadly, I don't the think the ending will quite play out like that but there will definetely be more unaware and Mark will get payback...maybe :) You'll just have to read and see, but I really appreciate the 5 stars and you taking the time to write lots of feedback! This makes my day! :)

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