Date: September 08 2015 3:16 PM Title: Run Like The Wind!
“Hey fatty don’t forget the race you have to run!”
That's brilliant.
School dance seems rather bothing though. I'd turn it turn even if it was Cassie. There's too much pressure to confirm in society. Still, it's a fun read this story.
Author's Response:
As a former fatty I know what kind of jokes to use :)
We will have to see, school dances can often provide more drama than you think.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2015 3:41 PM Title: Run Like The Wind!
I don't know why, but I imagined Alvin falling during his run, or at least tripping slightly. Was than in a previous draft or am I just a pessimist?
What does snafu mean by the way? Jamila and Cassie keep saying it and I have no idea what it means... congrats on 170 reviews by the way. I was the hundreth reviewer on the Aftermath, so I'll go for being 200th reviewer on this.
Author's Response:
An earlier draft involved Alvin tripping, spraining his ankle and then costing him team the final but changes to the final plot made this point irrelevant.
Snafu means: to throw into disorder; muddle.
I might be using it wrongly here but screwing up stuff can be referred to as a snafu.
Thanks, honestly didn't expect this many reviews but I'll take it :)
I look forward to your reviews. Also, did you get my Uptown Girl email?
[Report This]Date: July 19 2015 6:02 PM Title: Run Like The Wind!
Three cheers for Der Alvinator who made such a great come-Bach.
Author's Response:
Hah I was using a Terminator reference in the earlier draft of the chapter before I decided Rocky was better.
Thanks for the review!
Date: July 19 2015 1:01 PM Title: Run Like The Wind!
So Cassie has some gusto then! She may have been abit shy but she certainly isnt the shy type!
Author's Response:
Cassie in her present state is by no means a shy girl, maybe more aware this time of the risks since it involves a close friend of hers.