Date: September 07 2015 4:22 AM Title: Cosmic Cockups
Oh yeah, I think got to here. I vaugely remember reading this chapter. Well, off to the next chapter I do.
Author's Response:
Oh, two thirds of the story ain't too much to cover. Good luck :)
Date: June 07 2015 9:57 AM Title: Cosmic Cockups
Very interesting. Really made me invested in the characters. However, I gotta say that I completely side with Al on this one. What does this giantess know about what he's endured? She may have her own sob story too but it doesn't mean she should force this on him.
Author's Response:
You have a point, Cassie shouldn't ever make Alvin do that. It would go against their friendship and as well as be possible to even pull off, it would be equivalent to her demanding Alvin fall in love with her. Doesn't work that way.
Date: June 03 2015 6:28 PM Title: Cosmic Cockups
What I've read so far, to ch. 15, is very good. You have a good command of language grammer and spelling, and the developing storyline holds much promise. I really look forward to the remaining chapters, and hope that they won't take you too long.
Keep at it!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I hope I can be more fluid too, its the one thing I don't like about my writing so far. It shouldn't take me long ,provided writer's block or real world stuff doesn't hold me back. Those two can be deadly.
Date: June 03 2015 2:52 PM Title: Cosmic Cockups
So Cassie is throwing the guy an intervention then? I can't say I didn't see it coming but it's kinda funny how now it's a chance for us to learn Cassie's backstory!
Author's Response:
I'll explain why, these last few chapters will be a little risky. Just hope it works, next one may take a while.
[Report This]Date: June 03 2015 1:35 PM Title: Cosmic Cockups
Can't wait to see where this goes! Such a cliffhanger
Author's Response:
Thanks , it will be shocking.
[Report This]Date: June 03 2015 12:14 PM Title: Cosmic Cockups
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Author's Response:
That's right, be shocked. Be very shocked.