Date: May 29 2015 11:36 AM Title: Forgive and...Forget?
Yes Wendy seems sincere but route to pardon is still long!
Author's Response:
I believe that forgiveness is earned not given, anyone wishing to get it should do more than offer a simple apology.
[Report This]Date: May 29 2015 9:28 AM Title: Forgive and...Forget?
Well, we--the omniscient readers--know Wendy's attempt at apologizing was genuine. But, she really can't blame Alvin for being cynical. Heck! Even I thought (two chapters back) that she was just taking a more Machiavellian approach to messing with his head and heart! So, I wouldn't be surprised if it takes Alvin, himself, a couple more chapters to see the proverbial light.
Author's Response:
Yep ,Alvin is definitely not at fault for any of the bitterness he feels towards Wendy, she dug that hole all on her own.
Date: May 29 2015 9:02 AM Title: Forgive and...Forget?
"every chapter from here on out will have something major". That's good to know. I am really enjoying this story. I am sorry for not commenting prior as there have been soem chapters I haven't reviewed.
Author's Response:
Hey its fine, I usually assume people got busy and didn't have time to read or review my stuff. I think there is something major , just checked my story notes to confirm that there will be since the story is hurtling towards the end of the line.
[Report This]Date: May 29 2015 7:54 AM Title: Forgive and...Forget?
I'm excited to see what happens next! Alvin is being a tough nut but I can't blame him for being a bitter fuck, this shits been going on for years, not days! And yeah, I have to admit, it does seem rather convinient that Wendy is apologizing now. Not saying I don't believe her but it doesn't make her seem genuine when she's suddenly apologizing after years as soon as Alvin gets a bodyguard! Great chapter, it looks like you're planning on ending this soon, I would have liked more development to Cassie and Alvin's relationship but after this apology isn't a bad time to end this either...I'm looking forward to how Alvin handles this!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
If I were in Alvin's shoes, I would probably do the same, not going to fault him for this one. His reasons are logical and make perfect , just a question of whether Wendy can sway him.
Ending it soon? How soon? Give me a number, that number being the number of remaining chapters. I promise you I can reveal if that is correct or wrong.
Date: May 29 2015 7:11 AM Title: Forgive and...Forget?
Can't wait to see what happens next, as well as what the new story's like (have mainly been following this one & not incorperated).
Author's Response:
It'll be powerful stuff and with only 2 stories to write at the moment, it'll be written faster too.
The new story, I'll let afamilyman tell you more if he wants to comment on it. It's his first story on this site but I like what he showed vgiv and I and I think you guys will too :)