[Report This]Date: May 13 2015 8:01 PM Title: Dilemma
Great update! Happy to see this story still going!
Author's Response:
Thanks, how could I not? People seem to like it a lot and I enjoy writing it so that's two compelling reason to keep it going.
[Report This]Date: May 12 2015 2:23 PM Title: Dilemma
As for Wendy not respecting Alvin with regard to his being her older brother? I'm afraid that's all too similar to the "respect" parents train their children to show them. It's more like fear-induced courtesy based on an intimidating difference in size! And, when adolescence begins to reduce that difference, so that a child's looking up AT his parents is no longer synonymous with looking up TO them? Well, that's where the virtually incessant arguments, between parents and teenagers, really begin.
"That's my theory, and I'm stickin' to it."
Author's Response:
Okay, I like the detail you put into it but I'm not revealing anything :)
[Report This]Date: May 12 2015 2:17 PM Title: Dilemma
You've got me a little confused. Are Wendy and her three fellow Amazons going to lull Cassie into a false sense of security with their apology? Or, just Wendy, alone? And, how did Cassie wind up in Wendy's flashback?
Author's Response:
I can't explain that yet. However, I think I made a little mistake in typing Cassie into the flashback, I'll edit that. She isn't supposed to be there!
[Report This]Date: May 12 2015 1:22 PM Title: Dilemma
Again, not too much GTS content but I was interested in the conversation between the girls. We kind of got a peek into the psyche a bit, I hope we find out why they were really picking on Alvin in the near future.
Author's Response:
Everything will be explained in time, why it all happens and all. I realised this and Escape lined up pretty well although it was a coincidence that the two chapters would focus on the antagonists.