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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2015 2:21 PM Title: Counter

Well Alvin's stepmother will be a bad mood when she egts home. Alvin's stepsister is in a bad mood. Is it resonable to assume that Alvin will end up living with Cassie? He won't take up much room after all. And will be easy to conceal from her parents.



Author's Response:

  Yeah she will be, she'll be pissed for getting fired. Well it would seem that it's the best way out isn't it? Cassie's room is large enough for her to hide Alvin and he can always sleep in the dollhouse. Nice idea...real nice. 

Reviewer: 8D Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2014 7:40 PM Title: Counter

 “ Oh really? You can’t even reach the top of the shelf without a stepladder and you’re talking about hitting moi?”

Is the "moi" on purpose?



Author's Response:

Yep, just for Wendy to further insult Alvin.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2014 3:03 AM Title: Counter

Excellent chapter. Great to see some of Patricia away from home. And now she's been fired with only Alvin to vent her frustrations on. Also the fact that Wendy showed some emotions hopefully means something positive and nit just that she was embarrassed about tripping. Love the part where Cassie contemplates going to Alvin's track practice(I hope she does). Hope Patricia can be nicer to her son(or is he stepson) because what happened to her was actually kinda awful.

aaron
PS in a perfect world Cassie and Wendy would become friends but Wendy is gonna have to change.
Great story!!

Author's Response:

I don't think Patricia would do that but you're right in that she isn't too fond of Alvin at all, she could easily turn into a full time abusive stepmother. 

 

Oh you picked up on Wendy's trip? Observant of you to see it, remember that bit.

For the rest of your speculations, I'll neither confirm nor deny it, just ask that you look at the next chapter in 3 weeks.

 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2014 7:10 PM Title: Counter

So does Cassie really think she can keep Alvin safe even at home? What about from his step mom Patricia? Who knows what she might do to Alvin now that she lost her job, they never really were on good terms to begin with...It looks like Linda taking over wasnt good for everyone at the company!

AND did I just see Wendy cry!? Am I supposed to feel bad for her now, because it's not working, especially since she just tried to burn Alvin against the stove!

Good chapter, this is probably my favorite of your still updating stories, no joke!



Author's Response:

Yeah, Linda becoming CEO didn't benefit everyone but I would say it's for the best, no more sexual harassment or scams being perpertrated by the company. 

Yep, Wendy shed some tears there but there's more to her than I've revealed so far, keep your eyes peeled.

If this is your favourite, I shall have to work harder to find something you'll like even more, can't settle for just this, although it does seem to be very well received. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2014 11:21 AM Title: Counter

Intriguing subplot you've introduced, here. Will Wendy be stealing a shrink ray, from Patricia, to use against Cassie? Or, will it be a gigantism ray to make her Titan-sized?

Author's Response:

If they were on the same scale, Wendy would probably win in a fight since Titans have lighter bones and less muscle density compared to them. So if Wendy did as you suggested, Cassie would be a lot less powerful. Having said that, if they were on the same scale Cassie would be taller as Wendy is a short Amazon and Cassie is a tall Titan. 

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2014 10:56 AM Title: Counter

Well this was a awesome Christmas gift. Wendy tried to get revenge but sorta failed.
Alvin and Cassie are growing closer and closer. Soon they're probably going to go out.

Thanks for the amazing chapter

Author's Response:

 You're welcome, Wendy kind of failed but at least Cassie has made her think twice before laying a finger on Alvin again although Alvin is still in danger from her. 

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