Date: June 06 2015 9:30 PM Title: In the Company of Titans
Interesting to get a POV from the Titans. I would imagine that their issues and concerns are completely different than normals/Amazons, and it's showing through in this chapter. Good stuff here. Thankfully I have several more chapters to go before running out of material :)
Author's Response:
That is one of the perks of starting when the story is more than halfway done, lots of chapters to read.
There are definite differences in terms of social and economic problems too between the TItans and the rest, their immense bodies do have its fair shares of pros and cons, you'll find out over the course of the story. Thank you for all the feedback, its nice to hear that people like your story!
Date: January 06 2015 1:44 PM Title: In the Company of Titans
Given the space she had, the impact was negligible thanks to the rather , Wendy unsure if Cassie even felt it.
Rather what? That sentence seems incomplete.
By the way, what did Jamila, what did Cassie call you about?”
That setence needs changing. I think you'll notice it right away. I know there's more things I could be commenting on, and perhaps I should have reviewed more of the prior chapters, but I'm always worried about my review being too long.
Author's Response:
Ah sorry, seems even with two people proofreading it errors seem to slip through. A long review is fine, I'll still read and respond to it, length does not matter.
Date: December 09 2014 6:31 PM Title: In the Company of Titans
Nicely done. I like the relationship between everybody. Flowing naturally.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I place a lot of emphasis on character development in my stories these days, trying not to make the mistake of Aftermath.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2014 12:56 PM Title: In the Company of Titans
Yep! Wendy's proven herself a typical bully. She can't take what she dishes out.
P.S.---Sorry about almost missing this update. :-(
Author's Response:
It's okay, if you didn't review the chapter then I take it either you're too busy to review or the chapter wasn't engaging enough for you to review, which only means I have to work harder.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2014 8:13 AM Title: In the Company of Titans
No comment. Good story. Hope more chapters pop up soon.
Author's Response:
You might have to wait a bit but I am doing my best to get as many chapters released as I can without compromising quality.
Date: December 05 2014 7:14 PM Title: In the Company of Titans
Loved the chapter! Good on Alvin for making a bunch of powerful, and sexy allies!
Author's Response:
Yes it is good but they won't always be around to save him. That is where he'll need to be at his best.
[Report This]Date: December 05 2014 1:57 PM Title: In the Company of Titans
Worth the wait for sure! Really excited to see how this all plays out, now that Alvin's getting to know more titans. Not so sure how Katharine will take all this though.... I have a feeling she'll be jealous.
Author's Response:
Maybe she will, maybe she won't but either way ,it is good to see Alvin expanding his social circle.
[Report This]Date: December 05 2014 9:37 AM Title: In the Company of Titans
Definitely worth the wait. Revenge, vengeance, love,
all these emotions. Will have a huge effects on the story.
Author's Response:
Thank you, it'll definitely impact the story and I hope you follow it to the end. But where did you get love?