[Report This]Date: June 06 2015 10:24 AM Title: Early Morning
A nice start. Interesting characters so far. I'm a bit confused as I've never read about the Interchangables universe though. Maybe I missed it, but are there male Amazons/Titans? I assume not, but I wasn't sure.
Patricia seems particularly well written. She's snarky in an underhanded kind of way, but not downright nasty enough that she becomes one dimensional. Nicely done.
Author's Response:
Thank you, vgiv and I put in a lot of effort to make the starting chapters appealing to readers, good intro is a must.
There are no male Titans or Amazons, only women have different sizes while men are solely confined to their normal sizes.
I am trying to avoid one dimensional people for this story, it should feel more real. I don't mind one dimensional villains but maybe in a less real world setting.
[Report This]Date: December 06 2014 4:19 AM Title: Early Morning
Impressive. Can't wait for more. Love the character development.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I try to have characters that are believeable and have some sort of natural progression. Hope the rest of the story will impress you.
Date: October 28 2014 6:05 PM Title: Early Morning
Alright, thanks for the info!
Author's Response:
I'll have to delay it again but the next chapter is close to being finished.
Date: October 14 2014 5:50 AM Title: Early Morning
Any idea when the next chapter will be out?
Author's Response:
Kind of busy this week, expect an update....next week?
[Report This]Date: October 01 2014 8:24 AM Title: Early Morning
Cassie's heart is in the right place, but I hope she doesn't just make more trouble with her help! Alvin's hurt bad, and the last thing he needs is to have more problems piling on him!
I can't wait to see more Cassie and Alvin! Between Cassie's guilt and Alvin's mistrust, the two have their plates full trying to come together!
Author's Response:
We'll need to see how Cassie intends to help Alvin and if Alvin's faith in her pays off. Yeah, he doesn't need more problems for sure, Wendy is enough for now. Not to mention whatever is still lurking in the back.
I am glad you like to see Cassie and Alvin together, it'll definitely be fun watching the two trying to talk without breaking it off!
Date: September 30 2014 6:37 PM Title: Early Morning
Yuuuusssss
Finally some niceness between Alvin and Cassie... Yay yay a yaya yay yay yay yay
Email : wendellwu@live.com
Msg escape and aftermath via that.
Love this chapter :D
Author's Response:
Check you email within the next 24 hours, it should be there. Mind you, the chapters are all together so Aftermath is like 300 pages while Escape is 87 pages.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2014 3:34 PM Title: Early Morning
Great story! I loved the interaction between Cassie and Alvin.
Author's Response:
Thanks and also great to see a new reviewer! Shows my story is appealing to a wider range of people.
[Report This]Date: September 27 2014 6:30 AM Title: Early Morning
NoStory why did you remove the or escape stores? I like to reread them you know ;P
Could u pls put back on?
Author's Response:
I won't put it back on. However, I can email them to you. Send me a pm and I'll send it as an attachment.
Date: September 26 2014 6:21 PM Title: Early Morning
Yay! I knew Cassie wouldn't be as bad as the others! Alvin has it rough, but it's good that he's finally found someone to lean on. Sic her on team Wendy!
Author's Response:
Team Wendy? You mean people actually like her? That's something....
[Report This]Date: September 22 2014 4:12 PM Title: Early Morning
So, any idea when the next chapters gonna be out? According to vgiv, it sounds like it might be a while, as you're working on another story?
Author's Response:
I've already finished chapters 4 and 5 so I can have them sooner than expected. I'm working on The Escape Redux, a rewrite of my first story and if you like you can give it a read. I haven't updated in over a month so I'd like to get the next one out.
Date: September 22 2014 7:41 AM Title: Early Morning
Teah, after posting the review, I see in probably should've posted something other than "mixed size".
Author's Response:
Either way, I agree with you that I can't wait to see the sequel.
Date: September 21 2014 4:06 PM Title: Early Morning
@Darien Fawkes, BTW, are you still working on a sequel to your own mixed size school story, "Who's the Bigger Person"? I loved that one! :)
Author's Response:
It's not really mixed size when it is just one giantess. Kind of like saying my first story is a mixed size one. Having said that, I am eager to see the sequel, whenever it comes out.
Date: September 21 2014 10:11 AM Title: Early Morning
Nostory wrote the plotline and chapters. I just had the idea for the whole series. We check and edit each others work. I write a few scenes. A decent part of the second chapter was done by me, due to a world building issue. Other than a few I do, Nostory does all of the work for this story. I only step in if something is wrong with how something is explained in the world.
So technically, we are we are not doing the stories together, in the sense we wrote chapters together, but we do in the sense that it is a collaboration for the series. So yes and no, if that makes any sense. How would you explain it, Nostory?
Author's Response:
You more or less summed it up.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2014 9:31 AM Title: Early Morning
@Vigiv. Are you and Nostory doing this story together ?
Author's Response:
No, this is my story but I've chosen to set it in the Intersizables world. vgiv critiques my writing and points out any contradictions with the rules of the series as well as anything he doesn't like. If I disagree, we debate it before one of us gives in and then I either change it or do nothing. I don't think we could co-author a story, I'm more of a gentle gts fan while he leans towards the dark. It wouldn't be impossible but the contrasts would be telling.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2014 8:56 AM Title: Early Morning
I just realized how much work I'll need to do.... I can easily imagine this happening at my high school. Once a kid got chased by seniors into the boys locker room, and then tied him to the urinal, which happened to be overflowing.
The tight hallways, lockers, people stopping to chat in the middle of the hallways while I'm struggling to get past them, all accurate.
And yes, I have plans for Katharine. But won't reveal anything as of yet....
Author's Response:
Yikes, I hope that kid got out fine.
I am glad I got the details right, this world you made deserves to be described to the fullest.
Date: September 18 2014 8:33 PM Title: Early Morning
Sounds great!
Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy it then!
Date: September 18 2014 11:06 AM Title: Early Morning
@Nostory: Totally understand that you want to keep the plot a surprise for everyone, but can you at least tell us when the next chapter is expected? :)
Author's Response:
That I can. Expect it around Sunday.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2014 5:35 AM Title: Early Morning
@Nostory. Well, I can see how that shoutbox issue would've stopped production on "A Different View", however, as far as I know, the guy who wrote the Ashley story deleted it for other reasons that were completely unrelated.
Anyway, like I said before, I'm absolutely loving this story! In addition to seeing a bit more on how things play out between Cassey and Katharine (probably butchered both those characters names haha), I'd love to see how Alvin's classes/relations with the other girls at school are... Maybe see who some of his guy friends are?
Just my two cents
Author's Response:
Well I'd love to tell you more but that would be spoiling it for you. You got Katharine right but Cassey wrong, it's Cassie although its short for something else. Guy friends....does even he have them? *goes to check to on them*
Interesting....
Date: September 17 2014 10:59 AM Title: Early Morning
@Nostory. Nope... I remember that one. It got deleted though. I was PMing the guy who wrote it a while back & he said he deleted his account or something, so it's not there. His account is up though, just with no stories on it...idk what happened. How do you delete your account btw?. I don't even know.
As for the story I mentioned earlier, I think that one was called "A Different view". Great story idea, but it never got finished :(
Author's Response:
If you go to the shoutbox and look at the entries for late June, you'll see why, that should be the reason. I think to delete it you got to pm an admin or something.
Date: September 17 2014 1:47 AM Title: Early Morning
Hey, NoStory :) I really like how this story is shaping up to be, high school stories are really my thing! The interactions between normal Alvin and titan were really good, and I'm very interested in seeing how school is like between regular folk, amazons and titans stewed together. Keep going, I'm rooting for you~
Author's Response:
Oh thanks, glad you liked it!