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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2014 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

P.S.---Welcome home! :-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2014 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

To paraphrase Bobby Brady:

"Mom always said 'Don't play paintball around the house.' "

Author's Response:

Mom said a lot of things that we don't pay no attention to :P

Reviewer: Shrunkjoey Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Pretty good story



Author's Response:

Hehe, pretty short too :P - I did a lot of 'burst' pieces back in the day.

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