[Report This]Date: September 07 2014 12:37 PM Title: One Last Snack...
Fantastic story. It's great seeing such a talented author writing out unaware stories including micro and vore, they are really rare to find these days, sadly. And you did such a great job. The last chapter even was the best for me, I loved the idea of Kelsey getting "a taste" of her own medicine and joining the party too on a one way trip ;) I am a big fan of irony and sarcasm which just fits well in unaware, and I loved parts like these a lot: "The cup finally arrived at face level. “I sure hope this helps my tummyache,” Lexi said, looking down at her stuffed gut. “Well,” she continued, closing her eyes and tilting her head back, “only one way to find out.” and “Kelsey joined the party in Alexis’s tummy,” he said." or "An extremely loud burp escaped from Lexi’s mouth as she finished off the last of the ginger ale. Tommy shivered in fear, having listened to the sound of the fluid entering the teenager’s stomach.". If you write again I hope youll use plenty of these irony and sarcasm too again. Hope youll write lots of future stories, youre a great author.
Author's Response: I'm glad you got all the irony and really enjoyed it. It's kinda funny, I was just questioning my own abilities as a writer when I logged on and read this, so this just made my day! The new murder mystery story will have its first chapter up Friday afternoon (or evening if your on eastern time), and I look forward to hearing your feedback on it.
[Report This]Date: September 07 2014 12:29 PM Title: One Last Snack...
Loved the story. You have a great way of describing vore
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm a big vore fan so I wanted to go into more detail with those scenes on this story than on my last one.
Date: September 07 2014 8:52 AM Title: One Last Snack...
Kelsey is dead?!nooooo!Why you killed her,snif:(
It was a nice work but i don't like the sad end for my dear kelsey,snif,snif:((you were too cruel for her!
Highly your new story!See you!
Author's Response:
Well, she did kinda deserve it, committing cannibalism and murder and all but look at it this way at least Tommy gets to have happy-ish ending! I noticed that on this website the giantesses always seem to win so I figured I would change it up sometimes.
glad you liked the story and I'll make sure to have the new one up soon. :)
[Report This]Date: September 06 2014 7:30 PM Title: One Last Snack...
Great story!your vore stori is great,i love vore and you become my favorit author in that category and continue your story!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it! I'll try to have the first chapter of the new story up sometime before next weekend and it will be a direct continuation of this one, but feel free to check out my original story Not-So-Happy Meals too since it is all part of the same universe :)