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Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

"He spread his arms across the skin above her upper lip in the biggest embrace he could manage, while planting a kiss under her nose. She kissed his whole torso with a small twitch. "

THIS IS SO WELL WRITTEN, THAT I WISH IT WAS HAPPENING TO ME.



Author's Response: Thank you. That's probably the highest compliment you could give.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2014 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

@lc725: How could the waitress get away with it? A chloroformed handkerchief over Mary's mouth? In full view of the other two guys plus the rest of the dining public? Not even Matt is that self-absorbed!*

*Sorry, DG. I tend to get long-winded when I become emotionally over-involved in a giantess story.

Author's Response:

Love it...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2014 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 6

Together, at last!

I just wish I could give you a hundred extra stars just for avoiding the cliche' of abduction-by-horny waitress.

Author's Response: Nah, the waitress isn't into little guys.

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