[Report This]Date: August 17 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
been thinking about the facebook idea. The photos would need to show the relative size. A photo of a man shrunken would look the same as him at normal size ... except for whatever's in the background of the shot.
Author's Response: Yep, hence why he stands next to Brian and later Mary. Certainly need something to show scale. Some of Matts photos are meant to be obvious and some more subtle in this regard.
[Report This]Date: August 14 2014 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
Is he up for it? That's like asking if Fort Knox is up for receiving more gold!!!
Date: August 14 2014 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
Its a nice, but slow start. The presence of "giants" makes me cringe, but hopefully his rendevous with Mary will make it all worth it. She looks like she might be a sweet, fun,and playful giantess. I look forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: August 14 2014 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
I like the premise a lot and the writing flows very nicely, just hoping to see some GTS interaction in the upcoming chapters instead of just the guys. I love the slow shrinking in stages, hope there's a lot more of that.
It's a good thing Scott's cool with being tiny and Mary likes it that way too, very excited to see where this goes. I'm picturing her 50 feet tall in a bikini at the park while a very tiny Scott gets photographed biking around on her like a landscape.
Author's Response: Oh, now that idea dovetails nicely with another I had in mind... I think that might make a sequel to this story, rather than a part of this one. Otherwise we might never find an end.