Reviews For Beach Girl
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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 6:50 PM Title: 'Problems'

WOW. Will totally didn't deserve to get killed like that for having an outburst during a stressful time in his life! Even if he meant every word of what he said, damn...Not to mention she basically raped that guy Dan. Christy's got issues.

This is a good story BTW, I read it all in one go just now. I'm glad I caught this early on, because it would have been a pain to catch up if it was further in. I wonder what will happen now?



Author's Response: Thank you for the review :) I'm glad you decided to read it before it got too long to justify starting, the same thing happened with my previous story 'Kai and Tris'. It got too long and nobody would want to start a story with over 20 chapters I guess. :P

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2014 8:45 PM Title: 'Problems'

What happened? It's been a week since you've put up a new chapter. Everything going alright?



Author's Response: Yes, I just won't be able to add chapters as often as I hoped, but I will be adding chapters none the less. :)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2014 7:04 PM Title: 'Problems'

That just happened, great plot twist



Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2014 7:02 PM Title: 'Problems'

Wow she killed Will just like that but I see her pain and am curious to see how she'll get around this.

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