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Reviewer: deathpenalty109 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2020 9:39 PM Title: 'Meet Christy'

good story but the ending ruined it for me. it felt kinda lazy 

Reviewer: Kellerkid11 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2016 2:32 PM Title: 'Meet Christy'

Loved the story but I'm not going to give it a bad eating because if my taste, I'm more of a gentle giantess and couples kinda guy. Didn't like the ending but overall it was amazing!

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2015 8:33 PM Title: 'Meet Christy'

One of the best stories I've ever read. The twist is amazing. Please continiue writing more! Like I said, it's one of the best stories ever, and had me captivated throughout the whole thing. Love it!

Reviewer: combine44 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2014 12:25 AM Title: 'Meet Christy'

I liked the story overall, but seeing Christy kill dan was just brutal. I mean going from thinking about him lovingly one day to killing him the next? If anything I think she would have killed Isabelle and kept him around as a pet or slave. 8/10 overall 1/10 last chapter

Reviewer: clacker Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 1:28 PM Title: 'Meet Christy'

i loved  the story, did not expect that ending tho!

thanks for writing it, looking toward your next project

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 8:35 PM Title: 'Meet Christy'

I really think you spoiled it there with the ending, killing someone is believe it or not, not something you suddenly decide upon doing. For Christy to just kill Dan and Isabel like that would require more build up, she just didn't look like a murderer from the start, a bitch at most.

  Plus you kind of threw away the big plot of that shrinking epidemic, it remained unresolved. I hope your next story doesn't end this way, I'll read it if the concept interests me. 

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2014 9:39 PM Title: 'Meet Christy'

We have to get this girl some meds. Hopefully she can calm down a bit. The characters are enjoyable but only do many mood swings before she has burnt her last bridge.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2014 9:04 AM Title: 'Meet Christy'

Damn Christy is pissed , I am guessing there is going to be a big scary giantess.

 

 

Reviewer: zumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2014 9:05 PM Title: 'Meet Christy'

Great chapter as always! Always look forward to reading this story, and these last few chapters have been absolute gold especially. Definitely looking forward to more. :)

 



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! :)

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 8:00 AM Title: 'Meet Christy'

I think maybe you have too many plot points going on at once. Im not sure introducing a world-wide shrinking epidemic into a story about a giant girl was necessary. And then Dans parents get squished? Plus Dan doesnt seem too sad about it if he ddecidd to go on that date after all...I still like this story, mind you, but I do have those^ criticisms.



Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! Just to clarify, Dan is sad about his parents but not as sad as he should be, primarily because he had a bad life with them. Also the whole shrinking epidemic is going on in the background and I added that in because it's kind of the same universe as my previous story. I like to make sure my stories are somewhat realistic in a sense so it really does help when people point these things out :) I hope I cleared that up for you ^^

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 5:52 AM Title: 'Meet Christy'

That's not smart, bringing your sister for a date but Dan can't be faulted when Jess was suddenly thrust upon him. 

Reviewer: 101st airborne Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 2:24 AM Title: 'Meet Christy'

Really good story if you ever need a Soldier character im your man 

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2014 4:34 AM Title: 'Meet Christy'

Loving the character development. Liking this new kid. Please keep it up. Can't wait for the next few chapters



Author's Response: Thanks :) I'll make sure to add the next chapters as soon as possible :)

Reviewer: clacker Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2014 7:59 PM Title: 'Meet Christy'

I'm liking where the story is going! A++ so far



Author's Response: Thanks :) There's a lot more to come

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2014 8:18 AM Title: 'Meet Christy'

A nice start indeed, probably she finds someone who submits to her and stays with her accepting her "bad" behavor :)

 

Keep writing

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 11:50 PM Title: 'Meet Christy'

You seem to have some of the scaling confused. I suggest you use the Giantess Converter in the Writing Tools section of this website. Can really give you a good idea of how her scale compares to normal people.

 

For instance, at her scale, a person would be between 1.5 and 2 feet tall. Not quite small enough to do some of the games described in this initial chapter.



Other than that, I find this premise to be enjoyable. I like that she isn't really aware of how much of a bully she is, which can set her up for "redemption", which is a subject I always tend to enjoy.



Author's Response: I'll address the issue with her size right away. I've always enjoyed reading about these story lines so I decided fo write one like it. Look out for a lot more in this story.

Reviewer: clacker Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 8:49 PM Title: 'Meet Christy'

Pretty good! Looking forward the rest

 



Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 7:38 PM Title: 'Meet Christy'

Very cool, will this be ongoing?



Author's Response: Yes it will, I'll be writing the chapters slower than my last story though.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 7:24 PM Title: 'Meet Christy'

Make her bigger if you want to do butt action since shoving a man down her pants at 20ft isn't realistic.



Author's Response: Will do :)

Reviewer: anton1991 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 6:33 PM Title: 'Meet Christy'

Awesome. I was sad to read that Kai and Tris had anded, but his ca become a great replacement :)



Author's Response: Kai and Tris could continue later on, but for now I'm taking a break from it. I felt like I ran out of ideas in that story, but I have plenty more for this story. :)

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