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Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2016 5:20 AM Title: The Borrowing: Chapter 1 [NEW 6/23/16]

This is good, it can be its own story. It works as an unaware, a gentle or both to some degree. I think you should consider making it a full fledged one. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Nostory! I do want to write a full story out of it, but I'm afraid I might not finish my other fics as a result ._.

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