Reviews For The Escape Redux
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Reviewer: vgiv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 9:58 PM Title: Goddesszilla

What a dick move. Hot girl shows up to a beach after a long swim, and no gentleman buys her a drink? The gall of people these days... making a lady go out of her way for a bite and something to wear.

 



Author's Response:

Haha and they say chivalry is dead? Jessica should definitely have gotten more than being forced to change in public, wear rags for clothes, eat raw and unprocessed food and then get fired on by some ungentlemanly soldiers for it. Yeah, chivalry is dead. Although she did endanger Caitlin with her eating so Jessica isn't totally blameless. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 3:05 PM Title: Goddesszilla

So we have like six chapters left of this? I wonder if Jack is going to romance her in this story or not, maybe in the sequel? Anyway, this is starting to draw my interest again so kudos! This was definitely my favorite chapter of the story!

Author's Response:

  I would only do that if Jack could win our vertically gifted heroine's heart over in that amount of time. Thanks for liking it, I wrote most of it in one sitting so wasn't sure how it would be received. Normally I take my time to write things out but with college, time is at a premium so I need to finish these stories first rather than write one chapter a week. I can do that again after this and Downtrodden ends. Most likely I will follow it up the sequel to this one , got it all planned out while I still need to plan my second Intersizables story. 

Thanks for reviewing, hope you'll enjoy the end of this one!

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