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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Mercedes Spenz, I like that. Also, I usually don't like giant males, however I seem to like Cameron so far. Having said that, it can be annoying when males are absent from a story because it doesn't seem as believable.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 12:06 PM Title: Prologue

This reminds me of the story Freshman by Jacksmith. Was that your inspiration? Also a few too many dots in place. A grouping of three is fine. Not sure if you know this: You can use the ALT GR key and the . key to make a grouping of three without having to press the button more than once.



Author's Response: Yeah I read that one :) but no, this is actually the prequel to a story I've written called Minime which is on wattpad. I'm currently editing it but will put it up soon :)

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