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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

The line spacing is a bit excessive. Have you tried the "Paste From Word" button. That may solve the problem. Anyway good chapter. I didn't see anything problematic.

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