Date: February 21 2016 9:25 PM Title: Prologue
i really like your story and how these two brothers bonded, so i think you should continue on with this awsome story:) !
Date: June 25 2015 6:28 PM Title: Prologue
Just wanted to say that this story is truly adorable. I really enjoyed it so far. Also, I don't think you should worry about the G/T contents. This isn't the first story like this, so I think it first here just fine. Thanks again for sharing this and hope to see more soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I appreciate the feedback. And yes, Marcus is pretty adorable as a teen ^^
Date: June 25 2015 4:57 PM Title: Prologue
So, is Minime an alternate ending to this story, or will it just pick up where this story leaves off?
IMO, would be great to have the two stories with separate endings, simply because there's so much unexplored stuff and unanswered questions I have with this one.
Author's Response:
Minime is basically the original story that IWIWN was based around, being Thomas and Amy's struggles together. IWIWN is the prequel to this, where we go into much more detail about Marcus and Thomas's old friendship together before his mother went to prison and he changed his ways. It is set three and a half years prior to Minime. I really should have posted Minime first, I know, but I really needed to edit it (I wrote it years ago and the quality was terrible).
Basically, when I finish IWIWN, it will fast forward a couple of years, to the start of Minime.
Hope that makes sense... thanks though for reading!
[Report This]Date: June 25 2015 2:41 PM Title: Prologue
Cool to see this story back! It's crazy now, knowing that Marcus is gonna get killed at some point. Will this story show that or will the other one flashback to that?
Date: July 17 2014 10:21 PM Title: Prologue
Keep up the awesome work, & hope Kyle returns.
[Report This]Date: July 17 2014 9:48 PM Title: Prologue
As someone who just finished writing a story where a giant character was blind, I'm real interested to see how Kyle's relationship with Marcus developed.
Date: June 01 2014 12:06 PM Title: Prologue
This reminds me of the story Freshman by Jacksmith. Was that your inspiration? Also a few too many dots in place. A grouping of three is fine. Not sure if you know this: You can use the ALT GR key and the . key to make a grouping of three without having to press the button more than once.
Author's Response: Yeah I read that one :) but no, this is actually the prequel to a story I've written called Minime which is on wattpad. I'm currently editing it but will put it up soon :)